Corrections

Corrections

to my student...

“I made a few minor corrections,
for example when you place
your introduction it should really go
at the beginning instead of the
end of the sentence like you’ve
been doing, and when you give
a quote to prove an important
point you would
like to make you should explain
it and not make it stand alone and
do all the work, the red marks
you see are
a few corrections where I indicated
you should change the verb tense,
check spelling, use an article,
preposition, or pronoun maybe
add an adjective,
or adverb here and there for interest
sake and imagery, even alter the sentence
structure for variety, remember that a
sentence does need a verb, a subject
is helpful, then if you would double
space so I can read your whatever
this is and perhaps add a title, your name
and date at the top, or anywhere
I might find it it would help me place
this work in time and space where it
belongs.”

marty rempel
retired teacher